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Coldharbour Mill (Warning story)

Posted by on February 1, 2013

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Hi, I am going to tell you about my story that we are doing in literacy. When we went on a school trip to Coldharbour Mill there was a man called Mr Robson, he was in charge of the children and the Mill. My story is set in Coldharbour Mill. My characters are Mr Robson, Hollie and Sophie. Hollie and Sophie were working in the Mill. Sophie’s hands were sore so she went for a little rest. Then Mr Robson came into the room,and shouted at Sophie. He gave her a strong warning. What do you think the warning might be?

Are you writing a story?

from Charley.

3 Responses to Coldharbour Mill (Warning story)

  1. thulbear Gracie and kia

    Wow it look’s like, you had a fun day.

  2. Thurlbear George and Josh

    I love the discription of her hand’s being sore.Just to be exact how did you get there?

  3. Ellen (from north newton)

    Me and my class have been to coldharbour mill to. its great fun isnt it?

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