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Letters of apology

Posted by on October 11, 2012

Yesterday we started looking at an apology letter to the Three Bears saying Sorry I broke your chair and ate your porridge and slept in your bed. Do you write apology letters? Here is my letter.

Dear Three Bears,

Im sorry that I ate your porridge and broke baby Bears chair and messing up your bed. I am so so sorry, Its just
I was in the forest picking blackberrys until the wind blew. I felt really cold so I went deeper into the woods and I found a cottage,Because I was cold I climbed through the window to warm up. I’m sorry,I learnt my lesson.

From Goldilocks.

By Taylor

9 Responses to Letters of apology

  1. classms

    Yes I do .
    By Chloe

  2. Ross Mannell

    Hello Taylor,

    I agree it’s time Goldilocks apologised for stealing food and vandalising the property of the three bears. The poor innocent bears went for a walk while their porridge cooled only to return to the scene of a crime.

    Considering the apology and explanation, I hope the bears were able to forgive Goldilocks. 🙂

    This is a good letter of apology, Taylor.
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

  3. John Strange

    I love blackberries. I live in Alabama in the United States. We have blackberries in our woods too. But cold weather is coming soon and most of them are now gone.

    I enjoyed reading your letter to the bears.

    One of my college students tried to leave you a comment but she was afraid her comment was not accepted. She kept getting a blank page when she submitted her comment. Now I am trying to leave a comment to see if mine works.

    Keep up your good work in school.

    Dr. John Strange
    University of South Alabama
    Mobile, Alabama USA.

    My class is EDM310

  4. classmsbillie-jo


    I love your blog post it is brilleant.
    good work.

    from Billie-jo

  5. Jessica La Force

    Hi Taylor, I’m Jessica La Force. I’m from Mobile, Alabama in the United States. I’m in a class at the University of South Alabama called EDM310. I thought your apology letter was perfect. We should all write apology letters from time to time. Also, that is one of my all time favorite stories! I hope to read more of your posts in the future.

  6. lewis

    sounds cool i hope you enjoyed it from lewis

  7. Anonymous

    Hi way do you lose of story on your bloging paeg

    From Tullyanne & Sarah

  8. Anonymous

    Hi I like the 3 little bers

    from Sarah

  9. Anonymous

    I love goldilock’s,she is so cute

    love sophie

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